Voice Reel Analysis Report

 

1. Festival Ad -            Overall a good track – The end is clipped and the remnants of it appear at the start of the next track.

 

2. Cereal Ad -               Starts with the last track – Good mix but small clicking sounds (example: 0:00-0:07). Again the end is

                                        clipped and the remnants of it appear at the start of the next track.

 

3. Yoghurt Ad -           Starts with the last track -“We just had a good idea” (0:00) the “We just” is slurred. Then “Ice cream”

                                        (0:03) sounds like “Ice Keem”. There are clicks, maybe mouth noises. “With a tang” (0:24) there’s a

                                        fluff here. Again, the end is clipped and the remnants of it appear at the start of the next track.

 

4. Supermarket Ad - Starts with the last track - Overall a good track

 

5. Gaming -                  There is slight background noise (rumble) this isn’t the sfx atmosphere of the birds, it’s underneath.

                                        There is some clicking – for example (0:34-0:35) on the word “Numbers”.

 

6. Children’s Book -  “My hat” (0:27) there’s a click just on the ‘M’ as the voice comes in. This usually indicates that it is an

                                        editing issue probably during the clean-up or a drop in. “Little Naughty Gnome” (0:32 and 0:44) the

                                       “Little” sounds like ‘Mittle’.

 

7. Teen Book -            Background noise throughout (rumble). Mouth noises in the first sentence. “If only he could

                                        get at it” (0:16-0:19) the “he could” is slurred. At mark (0:24-0:25) there’s what sounds like a

                                        suppressed swallow “bottom of the pit”(swallow) “and the ground etc.,” Mouth noises after the

                                        sentence “this is what it’s like etc.,”(0:39-0:41) and through to the end.

 

8. The Red Fox -        The wind sfx is maybe a little too much and distracts from the text. I think an ominous, tense piece of

                                        music, not too overwhelming, low strings or simple discorded piano? “With that etc.,” (0:04-0:05)

                                        sound of your lips opening before the word “With”, this can usually be taken out in the clean-up

                                        process. There’s maybe a little electrical spike in between the words “tree” and “might” (0:43).

                                        I like the tree being chopped down sfx, works well and not too overpowering. Mouth noises

                                        throughout.

 

Conclusion:                 The overall mix of your reel is good, nice balance between music and voice. Parts of the read,

                                       production and clean-up need just a little tweaking though. This would take your voice reel from a

                                       good one to an excellent one. You have a great voice, a nice tonal quality and a sense of rhythm when

                                       interpreting the scripts.